Editing
- take out some commas that are not needed and only used to break up speech.
- Fix the past and present verb tenses in my paper and make sure they are consistent.
- Fix run on sentences
Revise
- get rid of this, and it’s throughout my paper and replace them with more powerful descriptive words
- transitions from one paragraph to the next
- ending> need to find a way to communicate what lessons I took with me or what I learned from the experience> need to take back the elixer to my ordinary world> also communicate what the readers cdan learn from the story without sounding to cliché
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